Welcome to Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. This week’s photo is by Rachel Bjerke of Mostly Words.
Now, I missed the last one. I wrote maybe a third of something, but it was too sad—so sad I couldn’t continue. This one’s more of a bed time story. Or, a nightmare story. Whichever, take your pick.
100 words
Photo Copyright © Rachel Bjerke
I’ll never forget that night. I was sent alone again, for grandma’s house, like Little Red Riding Hood. Time spent in these parts hadn’t stopped me from looking over my shoulders. I swear, the trees talk to each other.
I walked, steadfast but quiet. I reached the house, relieved. But there I heard the strangest sound, so I bolted inside. Oddly, my parents were there, and my entrance startled them. Dad was disappointed, enough that he challenged my “fear of monsters.” He opened the door. It was a man.
I was the only one to escape grandma’s house alive.
Participation is welcome to all. The goal is to write a story, beginning-middle-end, in 100 words or less. You are also encouraged to “think outside of the box.”
Click here to view the inLinkz for what others have written for the prompt, or add one.
Visit Addicted to Purple for Rochelle’s own stories and her Friday Fictioneers page for more details. You can follow her blog for the prompt each Wednesday.
That is a nightmare bedtime story. Excellent writing!
LikeLike
Glad you enjoyed it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well written and very spooky. I like the way you suggested that the trees talk to each other.
LikeLike
They kind of do, really. (Even though they don’t have brains.)
LikeLike
Dear Adam,
Definitely a nightmare. Creepy.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Thanks.
LikeLike
Very sinister.
LikeLike
As ominous as I can get in a hundred words. (Without going too far. Or maybe I didn’t go far enough…)
LikeLiked by 1 person
You went quite far enough for me! Really spooky!
LikeLike
Okay.
Thanks for reading!
LikeLike
A very chilling end.. Sometimes men are worse than monsters though.
LikeLike
I’d like to think the kid was right that some men are monsters.
LikeLike
“I swear, the trees talk to each other.” Great voice.
You’re doing well w/ these, A.
A few too many commas for me on this one, but I wouldn’t stop if I were you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Scary! Your 100 words were well used.
LikeLike
Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
end was unexpected
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your story was quite creepy. I’m trying to figure out if it was a dream or a memory.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sounds like something I’m going through right now…dream or reality? lol.
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is scary and completely unexpected. Great story.
LikeLike
Thank you. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person